My Emotions
My fear is a fire nestled deep in my soul,
It will never leave me but I wont let it ruin my goal.
My shame is a puddle trapped in my brain,
It will never drown me but there it shall always remain.
My regrets are like bees buzzing in my ears,
They sting me sometimes then suddenly dissapear.
My jealously is like darkness it shadows my thoughts,
It will darken my mood, but never for long.
My hatred is snow, so pure and so bright,
Yet quickly it melts and fades into the night.
My anger is ice it pierces true like a dart,
It may bruise my fists but it will never freeze my heart.
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nice job, rosie!
your metaphors are right on and your emotions show through. keep up the good work.
joyce
Thankyou
I always appreciate any feedback so i am very pleased you like it, i wasnt so sure of it myself so cheers !!