If

If

If I give my heart to you
will you hold it true?
If I say I want you
will you say that you do too?

If I show you all I am inside,
will you accept me for what’s there?
If I tell you all there is to tell,
will you listen and really care?

Do you understand that I'm just a man that’s in love with you?

If I hold your hand
will you never let mine go?
If reach for you from time to time
will you never tell me no?

If I see us down the rode
will you be standing next to me?
If I offer all I have to give
will you take it sparingly?

Do you understand that I'm just a man that’s in love with you?

If I say you are my soul mate,
will our spirits intertwine?
If I say I am afraid
will you ease me down the line?

If I lose my way in life
will you guide me back to you?

Do you understand that I'm just a man that’s in love with you?

Copyright © 2007 Ronald J. Edwards

This is good

You portray an intimacy to the scene of the garden, very beautiful. This is good on subsequent readings, I've enjoyed it each time. raskin

:)

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com

Hello Raskin, I didn't realize I posted this already , so I exchanged it
:)
thanks
ron

I'm confused

but it isn't the first time. This is also very well written, I thought the garden was was very good as well. raskin

look

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com

at my blog list of poems and you'll find it posted earlier, my bad :)

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