My Bridge

my bridge

destinations have a start
a place called the beginning
my journeys for strange reasons
are related to my sinning

running, walking, tripping
not always on a road
no matter where i wished to go
i had a heavy load

there was this time a cliff appeared
a chasm deep and wide
without a plan for this abyss
to cross its great divide

frozen within solitude
my thoughts often misguide
they said to stay just where i stood
what’s on the other side ?

carrying baggage so heavy
my hands about to break
straining hard without release
the pain was hard to take

“free your self, just let go
of this heavy load
if you want to travel on
a bridge will be your road”

whence came this voice that spoke to me
was without place or being
a bridge appeared across this span
doubting what i was seeing

who or what would care so much
to make this bridge for me
the distance far, the fall so deep
is this my destiny ?

i stood alone that point in time
not knowing if i should go
was then i noticed from behind
a wind began to blow

the force increased against my back
a gentle nudge at first
within this wind new thoughts blew in
this bridge should be traversed !

letting go the handles
that cut into my hands
my baggage fell away from me
resolve became my stance

fear no longer had me
in its grip so tight
i listened to the words i heard
to cross that bridge was right

this is what blind faith is
my bridge is a belief
that my care and keeping
will come for my relief

Copyright © 2007 Ronald J. Edwards

very very good

very good personification.. i really like this. it was very easy for me to visualize the poem. very good.
lynz

... a thousand words

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com

thanks CD, glad you "see" my pictures worth just the way i "saw" it :)

Fear Of The Unknown..

and placing our trust in a higher power.

Debs

yes

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com

without it i would be at the bottom of that chasm

thanks deb

courage

never seems to come easily and fear is such a major component. Thanks for sharing. raskin

Courage

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com

What makes a king out of a slave? Courage!
What makes the flag on a mast wave? Courage!
What makes the elephant charge his tusk in the misty mist or the dusky dusk? What makes the muskrat guard his musk? Courage!
What makes the sphinx the 7th wonder? Courage?
What makes the dawn come up like thunder? Courage!
What makes the hot n' tot so hot?... what puts the ape in apricot?
What do they go that i ain't got?... Courage!... You can say that again!
***Cowardly Lion from the Wizard of Oz ***

****SMiLES****

Your on great form tonight Ron! lol

Debs :.)

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