the “i” in guilt
the “i” in guilt
snuggled in-between
this little thing called “i”
when guilt a word in subject
blame of the who and why
there is the gee and you
that comes before the “i”
surprise of possibilities
can cause a heavy sigh
actions with desire
a substantiated move
it takes two to tango
but solely the reprove
el quickly is in line
with a tee just like a hilt
together not apart
make up this word of guilt
but why do i
look low and high
to find that my
home where i lye
this word of blame
i’m in the middle
so before the shame
must solve the riddle
looking for guilt in everyone
the question asked is why
that in the center of it all
is not “u” but “i”
Copyright © 2007 Ronald J. Edwards
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Crissy D Holloway I really
Crissy D Holloway
I really like your style. That was a very nice poem. AND SO TRUE.:-)
Crissy D Holloway I really
Crissy D Holloway
I really like your style. That was a very nice poem. AND SO TRUE.:-)
soooooo true
Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com
Hi Crissy,
Thank you for your kind words. I like the rhyming verse style of writing, i do have some free verse. Glad you liked the poem :)
ron
:)
Interesting concept...enjoyed the poem muchly...
:)
Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com
thanks, i am glad you liked it. I always have to look and understand my involvement in everything. Nine times out of ten I play a apart more than I realize at first. Remember when a finger is pointed at someone there are three pointing back at ourselves.
ron