muse poem 11/12 GHOST MIST

Did you feel the whisper
I sent it with a gentle caress
of these lips almost brushing up
rushing up against yours

The sounds of me enlightened
by a single strand of your ether
parfume soaking through my skin
mingling with this bloodstream
arriving inside the sanctuary of thought
where a vision of you measures
the width
the breadth
of my excursion into a reality of fantasy
when a touch leaves an indelible tremor
one that skips across five beats
to each breath
and I'm found wanting
in every aspect I claim as my essence
and your ghost lingers inside
every corridor
haunts
every doorway
with a vulnerable tenderness
none should know
and I'm the precious few
partially invited to show
a greater sensation
to being whole

Great!

This is a really awesome write! Most excellent and one to read over again. My favourite line 'and i'm found wanting' Loved the whole of that middle section, but entire piece is well written.

Debs

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