Hi Friends....i am a new member of this website. here i am produce my a lovely love poem. plz convince how it is ?

"FAIRY OF HEART"
O fairy of heart, put aside your pall,
Ovation me, I wish to loss in you.
Except you mine all vacant,
Say, I am alone what do?
Rainy moment drizzle around,
I wish to stay more close to you.
Quiet monsoon glamour phenomenon,
Let me clench in warm chest.
Some Dew bite on your cheek,
I wish to touch your moist limbs.
Lonely moment, lonely the moon,
Come to me dear very soon.
When sun sinks, when sun rise
I wish to see your lovely two eyes.
Sparrows twitter on the trees,
Open O my dear your silky tress.
Misty gloaming, falling spring
I wish to feel while bliss thrill.
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by -Saif Chowdhury.
i would be glad to have yours opinion .......thanks.
Thank you very much while wasting yours valuable time...
Regards,
Saif Chowdhury.