Resurrection!

When our souls smolder at their core
The coolant drops themselves outpour
To quicken the dead crust back to life
Suchlike is 'tween rain and earth strife
In death when we live we die no more!

Saif U'Lah - 23 September, 2007

Three standing ovations for a job well done


My great poetic friend is also a very deep poetic philospher?

Written by Reginald Levi Walker, on 25-10-2007 08:45
You will see this comment only if I really liked the poem I have read.

One standing ovation!

Down right outstanding.

That was a deep poem that was ripe with felling. I enjoyed the thoughts as I read the sentences. The paragraph structure allowed me to easily pursue the poem. It is indeed a very enjoyable read and I look forward to reading some more of this author’s work.

Two standing ovations

My God, this poet is good.

Please excuse my loud excited declaration,
Nevertheless, MY GOD, you are good.
God placed upon your mind, his inspiration,
You wrote them down as best, as you could.

You delivered the words of your poem with so much passion,
God painted you a picture so vividly clear.
His love and his joy just flows from your imagination.
Your words often express the things I hope to hear.

Please continue your words to write.
Faithfully, listen to everything that God has to say.
Think over every word until they come out right.
Your words just might brighten up someone’s day.

Three standing ovations

Very good job

Three applause for the thoughts, you express.
That poem will be placed among the very best.
You really wrote that poem quite vividly.
The ideal of Resurrection for all to see.
I really enjoyed the words I read.
Damn, I wish I penned them, instead.

May God continue to inspire your imagination with vividly descriptive phrases and words:

God bless you,

Pastor Reginald Levi Walker

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Thanks ever so much!

I know not, how I can thank you sir
For you cared to read my vision blur
Million thanks for this lovely trilogy
Full of ovations, profoundest eulogy
May it really prove for stallion a spur

Pastor Reginald Levi Walker,
This poem I wrote after the passing of my baby brother, of blessed memory - who united with the Atman after a fatal accident a month ago. Your words, and the thought that a holy man have taken the time to proffer this kind of extol, very much comfort and encourage me.

All Yours!

Saif U'Lah

Saifulah"s poems

With such beautiful descriptive narrative I can only imagine that your sculpure is as graceful and flowing as your poetry. Thank you for sharing your poetry. How I wish you could share your sculpture. Sincerely, Ezmerelda

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