Breathtaking!

The thrill
Of the ride
As you
Plunge
Deep
Inside
Of me

Onwards
We go
With a
Heave and
A ho

Getting
Wetter
I feel
As it
Keeps
Getting
Better

Exact
And erect
As your
Rod
Gently
Peters me

On
Faster still
As I
Spill
Luscious juice
On you

Musky
And sweet
As your
Heat
It entreats
Me

The slim
Of my
Limbs
Writhe

As you
Twist
And
Slide
In me

Rampant
And yearning
Our
Temperatures
Burn

Then
On on!

Through
Till
Dawn

For our
Thirsts
Have not
Worn

Moist
And hot
Bodies
Glide

On our
Breathtaking
Ride.

© Deborah Gordon 2008

..As Your Rod Gently Peters Me

Perfect!

T.W. Jolin

Breathtaking!

An aptly titled piece! Very sensual, very erotic, great write!
Dave

Thankyou Both

very much for your comments.

Debs x

Very passionate write, Scareysquirel

Wonderfully composed.

Thankyou TJ,

For your comments.

Debs

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