Child, I Will Comfort Thee
Sleep
Rest your eyes
A little more...
Drift to the shore
There’ll be meaning
Tomorrow.
Dream
Dream of galaxies
Serene...
Know the new day
Will remove all sorrow.
© Deborah Gordon 2008
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Interesting
I found this interesting because theirs so much room for interpretation. I wont even attempt to express my view just in case i get it all wrong. Some how this poem gave me a sort of calm in the end.... thank you, i enjoyed reading it
yours truly,
Kornelis Mwangi
`but for his grace '
Ronald J. Edwards
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Debs
I believe that in our ultimate sleep we all will find a shore of calmness and serenity, a dream that never ends, a land where happiness is found.
thanks for sharing
ron
lovely poem debs
this was so calming debs a lovely comforting poem sleep can solve so many problems things dont always look so bad in the morning , a great write thankyou for sharing it , from Willow
Many Thanks..
To you all for your kind comments on this one. I wasnt really sure where i was going on this piece, other than the love a mother or father would give to comfort their child. I tryed to capture the sense of calm within this write and reassurance that 'tommorrow' would bring a better day.
I really appreciate your thoughts on this, as it was very open to interpretation, and we all find different things in other's writing.
DEbs
You cured Insomnia
Very Nice Deb... You make me want to sleep more! It was simply said but full of nurting love!
Thank you for sharing!
Ray AKA yobarney
Many Thanks
Ray, for your kind words.
DEbs