Disconnection

Oh my dear!

Oh dear
Oh dear
Oh dear
Oh dear

You voice is strained
Are you in pain?

There seems to be
A problem here.

Oh my dear!

Oh dear
Oh dear
Oh dear
Oh dear

Why do you shout?
What’s that about?

Your words are
Not that clear.

Oh my dear!!

Oh dear
Oh dear
Oh dear
Oh dear

You wanna ruck?!
You’re outta luck

This line is
Breaking up...

© Deborah Gordon 2008

Hahaha!

i didnt even have to read the authors name to know it was you Deborah, i recognize your style anywhere.
very funny, quite sad for the other person on the line, he's really out of luck.... hehe. Great poem!

yours truly,

Kornelis Mwangi

Many Thanks

To you Kornelis. I was having a funny five minitues again!

Debs :.)

Very Funny

Debs! Enjoyed this write, very good!
Dave

Loved it

Hi Deb`s this was so funny I laughed and laughed ,very good write from willow

Many Thanks

To the both of you. I really do seem to come up with the most incredible nonsense!
Thanks again,

Debs :.)

Love it

Debs
I love your funny five minute ones, please increase this to fifteen minutes, thanks.
Andrew

Many Thanks

To you Andrew. That shoulden't be too much of a problem. I seem to find humour in most things, people....situations...fish!? Most things really! lol

Many thanks to you again.

Debs :.)

Me Likey!

Haha wonderous!! Absolutely love it! And to add, that's how life should be: finding humor in everything, then sharing it!

~~~
Write, write and write some more til the letters come off your keyboard!
- Charlie "Chuck Rickman" Jackson

Many Thanks!

Chuck Rickman, for your comments.

I agree with you, humour can be found in just about everything- Though its got me into trouble on a few occasions! lol!

DEbs

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