Mr Park Bench
I once met this fellow
Though ever so ‘yella’
Was rich in life’s great plan
His abode was a bench
Newspaper the fence
He lived on beans an’ spam
Indignant not, but buoyant so
For time forgot his pain, his woe
A wife, three kids he had no more
And riches ceased - for he was poor
The ‘ouse was sold' for this he told
He couldn’t even knock the door
His friends all felt - because he smelt
He wasn’t useful anymore
And as for luck - no job as such
No help of sorts from 'Lady Muck'
His kids looked down upon his sty
With life they often passed him by
His face was worn, his clothes were old
Upon this bench his tale he told
A seemly smile and eyes so bright
He talked and talked into the night
A child approached with hands laid flat
A penny thrown into his hat
A little sigh, the penny flung
He couldn’t take this from the young
Not proud though well ,was still his sight
He knew the truth of wrong and right
And as for loss and broken dreams
‘Tis all a part of life it seems
What good would coin and favour do
He would be well to see this through
For all the past had ever taught
Was greed upon the dollar sought
Now he was wise and to that end
He’d truly learnt to breathe again
I turned and smiled then walked away
I haven’t seen him ..to this day
© Deborah Gordon 2007
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brilliant debs
Debs I loved this one .a great tale of a poor old down and out with a heart of gold , well written and a good story line I thoroughly enjoyed this from Willow
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Debs,
you tell the tale of my friend jim, the bench's were his home, somtimes i walk looking under newspapers being read from head to foot, if you know what i mean. thank you for sharing these thoughts, jim was a lonely but good man.
ron
Thankyou Both
For your comments on this write. Although it had a degree of humour to it, i did infact base it on a man i used to sit and talk to. He was very ill even then, and i would bring him coffee and food when i could. Much of the poem is true in respect to his life, as far as people have been able to gather. He has sadly passed away now.
Debs
I think you finished this
I think you finished this one perfectly, enjoyed reading it a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed mine as well