My Aunt Fanny
Aunt Fanny was wrong, when she sang me a song,
Then she beckoned me forth to the fold.
I sat on her nighty, she cradled me tightly,
Then told me a story of old.
“Young child” she declared with a snort and a stare,
“There are things that I feel you should know.”
So she sat there with ease and she made me believe,
That my father was some sort of crow!
[On my father’s return]
“My child what is up?” he choked with a cluck.
“My darling you’re looking so blue!”
“You’re a CROW!” I declared, then he stood and he stared,
And off through the window he flew.
© Deborah Gordon 2007
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Hi
I thought your poem was well worded, a bit humorous, and excellent wording throughout. I just loved, well done I hope to get around to reading more from You.
Angel
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My aunt fanny
Thankyou Angel for your comments. Sometimes i get a bit childish with my poetry. Hence this one. Still it balances my more serious side.
Many thanks
Deborah
I like this one!
Very well done. Made me chuckle!
Thankyou
You are welcome my freind. I tend to veer into stupidity sometimes!
Debs
Stupid?
Not at all. Excellent work!
Stupid?
Not at all. Excellent work!
Thankyou My Dear!
Thankyou, you are too kind!
Debs