Sandbanks Of Deceit
Travelling down
The sandbanks
Of deciet
With a
Swish swish swoosh
I find my
Feet
Amongst the reef
And i am
Armoured
With a
Sword Fish
To cut through
The many lies
That fly
Around me.
© Deborah Gordon 2008
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Sand Banks of Deceit
I found this quite a powerful piece, for me it conjours up an image of being badly let down by somebody close, and then finding inner strength to stand strong against that situation. A fight that you never wanted. Maybe I have it wrong, there is a lot of poetry I read that I just don't get at all!! Good piece, like your style of writing,
Dave
Spot On!
Dave. It is not very often that somebody truely understands the interpretation of a piece. That is exactly what I was expressing here.
Many thanks
Debs
Smashing!
I really like where you went with this, Scareysquirel. You have a unique way of looking at things...or, perhaps, just a unique way of expressing yourself. Either way, damn good write!
Many Thanks
TJ, for your kind words.
Debs
Sweet deciet
Good vision of protection from the affliction of deciet, my sweet!
Many Thanks
jack.
Debs