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The Defeated

Posted December 4th, 2007 by Scareysquirel

Love has never wished us harm,
Nor would it so.

Though I can say,

I cannot bear to see another day.

© Deborah Gordon 2007

nice.

On December 4th, 2007 Mirada_Youth says:

nice.

The Defeated

On December 4th, 2007 moblues says:

Nice minimalist piece.

Mike

hi

On December 4th, 2007 ArtFromTheHeart says:

Nice work. Simply stated. Good title.

Ahhhh...

On February 2nd, 2008 tj says:

How sad. Very short poem. And, yet...long enough to read many things into it - TJ

Many Thanks

On February 2nd, 2008 Scareysquirel says:

Thankyou TJ. This was one of the first poems I wrote.

Debs

wow

On March 5th, 2008 cliche_disaster says:

wow.. i really like this. it is very simple, yet its meaning is so complex. i have a hard time writing like this so i give you major props.
lynz

Many Thanks

On March 5th, 2008 Scareysquirel says:

Lynz.

Debs :.)

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