I once wrote a two word poem, but incorporated the title to tie things together. This was on a site with a lot of professional poets and novelists. I thought I would be lambasted. Instead, everyone loved it. Poetry is an art form. It can be whatever you want it to be, regardless of length.

Mike

Thankyou Adamgray. They were both just a simple piece of minimalism. When the concept arose to me they provoked quite powerful thoughts. Sometimes less can be more, and have a greater affect on the reader. I am glad you were able to draw something from it. Thankyou again for your comments.
Deborah