Where The Cherries Get Merry

Come down to the crops
Where the radishes rock.
Where the cabbages
Bop through the night.

Where the cauliflowers stray
As they take to the hay
And the carrots
Advance to their right.

Where the blueberries strip
As they run for a dip
And the mangos

Politely decline...

Where the oranges swoon
By the light of the moon
And the cherries
Get merry on wine!

© Deborah Gordon 2008

Bravo!

LOL! I live in the middle of nowhere now, in farm country. Excellent use of vegatables. This is a cute poem.

Miranda

Thankyou

Thanks Miranda for the kind comment, it was a fun piece to write.

Debs

great poem.

great poem.

Thankyou

Thanks snowhiteanna, much appreciated.

Debs

i love its uniqueness...

dEbS,

i always love farms and plants...those that creep on the ground...and fruit trees...
cherries... i like them so much..

it's so fun reading this piece... almost like a jingle...

clairejane

Thankyou

Thanks again clairejane for reading my work. As you can probably tell I was having a silly 5 minitues when I wrote this one! I love cherries too!

Debs

i love its uniqueness...

dEbS,

i always love farms and plants...those that creep on the ground...and fruit trees...
cherries... i like them so much..

it's so fun reading this piece... almost like a jingle...

clairejane

excellent, debs...

A vegtable medley...so lyrical and amusing!

joyce

Thankyou

Thanks to you both for your comments, much appreciated. I agree, poetry should be fun!

Debs

Well here's my comment --

Fun.

And poetry should be that.

Mark Pearce
www.marzguy.deviantart.com

lovely

wondeful title and very well construc ted. it was both humorous and fun to read.. It brightened up my day:)

Well done SS

Thanks

Many thanks Musel, appreciate your kind comments here and i'm glad it made you smile.

DEbs

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