Wrecked

Come in, sit down. Drink, drink?
Whisky chaser? Just a small you say.. no
Large?…Ok!

Set sail upon this barge of
Alcoholic endurance,
Listing sideways all the while.
Captain’s at the helm: ignoring you.

Stern’s the better option
For a husband new.

Crash
Crash
Smash!

Abandon ship, abandon ship!
Going down fast. Sent an SOS to the
Coast guard. (Dot, dot, dot, dash, dash, dash...)

© Deborah Gordon 2008

Wrecked

Very amusing and easy to relate to!! We've all been there at sometime or another ha ha! Love the last verse! Great write!
Dave

Thanks Dave!

For your kind feedback here. It was a really fun piece to write.

Debs :.)

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