Come Back

So many things remind me of you
things we used to talk about
things we used to do.

All the times spent
making future plans
Believing everything you said to me
my heart was in your hands.

Everything is different now
a part of you has changed.
I can't seem to understand it
my life's all rearranged.

I hope someday that we'll go back
to the way it used to be
I miss you more than you could know
so please come back to me.

GREAT JOB!

I liked it
you rhyms were simple but smart
it just made sense and i got the raw emotion

painted an amazing picture in my mind

Great poem!
[.Tayler-Danger.]

Thank you. I am glad you

Thank you. I am glad you liked it. It was actually written a long time ago about my first love, I just recently found it again.

thank you again for your comment

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