I will go
I will go...
The sky turns grey…
I think this is the end…
The time has stopped…
I cannot pretend…
To be happy anymore…
I await my eternal snore...
The walls are coming in…
The pressure pushing against me…
Everything started to spin…
My soul is going to be set free…
Everybody is begging me to stay…
But I decide to go…
I’m afraid…
All my memories I will hold…
For now I grow cold…
Now I will go…
I will go…
(constructive Criticism is appriciated)
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'I Await My Eternal Snore'
Fantastic! I really get the sense I am being led, beckoned towards something here.
'Everything started to spin...'
May work better with- 'Everythings starting to spin' (If you want it to remain in the 'present context' )
Debs
Hey
Thank you very much for the help :D i apprciate it.
-SeaN!