Bitter
It's marked poison
do not swallow.
I know I shouldn't
but I taste it.
It's bitter
but I swallow.
I swallowed
now I'm bitter.
Will I be bitter
'til I'm old?
Will I be
old and bitter?
Bitter, that I used to be
young and sweet?
Bitter, that I was naive enough
to drink the poison that made me
Bitter?
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I actually preffer not to
I actually preffer not to write comments, since I don't want to offend anyone. I am a very fastidious reader and I can't stand any sort of cheap, clicheed and irrelevant poems. I decided to comment upon this, though. It has neither rhytm, nor rhyme, but it's very beautiful just the way it is. Original, fresh and... bitter. I enjoyed it. Thanks
It doesn't matter how slow you go, as long as you don't stop
It's quite interesting
It's quite interesting and...yeah, bitter.
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Carve your life with passion. ---Aflame