if i was

If I was heaven
I would let you in
I'd show you only the best
And I'd be your friend
If I was the air
That you breath in so deep
I'd be the sweetest
And I'd let you sleep
If I was the car
That went that fast
I would have slowed down
And made your life last
If only I was there
I'd change what was
I'd do what you'd want
And no excuse would be because
If only I was those
Of which we speak
But since im not
You became so weak
Im not heaven
so im not sure you can win
Im not sure if you can get in
My dear friend

hey

this was very touching, and something we all need to do
because tomorrow may never come
thanks you
God Bless You
Susan Jean

hey

Oh it was lovely writing it, I only wish people could read it and see me as me. Take me as me, feel my feelings and thoughts and all i want is to be reconized.

Kali

Oh it was lovely writing it,

Oh it was lovely writing it, I only wish people could read it and see me as me. Take me as me, feel my feelings and thoughts and all i want is to be reconized.

Kali

I recognized you

You have been recognized by many my friend, so I leave you a little note to say I have
I am there with you in your writing and yes you are one of many who can reach in and touch a strangers heart
thank you for you work of art
God Bless You
Susan Jean

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