I just don't care
You used to be the only thing
That kept me from slipping, or falling
Now that you aren't here and I'm all alone
That simple urge is yet again calling
I don't know how to stop myself
From feeling what I'm feeling
I get lost within the fogginess
Can't seem to find the clearing
As I glance around, I stumble
The bridge I walk along is bending
I feel my throat begin to close
There is no simple ending
I can't seem to find a place
To breathe in the clean air
I'm stuck within the fogginess
All alone, but this time, I just don't care
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Catharsis
Mandee,
I commented on your latest poem, one that affected me and allowed people insight into your personal pain. Since then I’ve had a chance to read all your offerings that should have acted as a catharsis for you.
Your undeniable ability should not be held hostage to that process forever and I would like to see some poems from you in another genre.
Growing yourself is also a way of healing
Peace & tranquility
thanks for the comment. i
thanks for the comment. i seem to have noticed that when i write different TYPES of poems, they dont turn out as good as the dark ones. also, i usually only write when im really depressed and need to get things out without screaming, or doing worse things due to my mood. im sure at some point i will be able to come up with some good ones that arent so bad, and when i do i will be certain to post them for you to view :) take care
*~*Mandee*~*