love actually..
emotions so fragile,words could tear..
tears flow shamelessly without a care..
what misery i've known like never before..
only his words seem to matter more..
you cant hear your voice neither can you see..
the world to you feels a distant fantasy..
you ask me now and i' ll say what i've said..
life without you is all tht i dread..
i smile through the tears and enjoy the fall..
'cause what life it is to never have loved at all!!!
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nice job
Beautiful. I would correct the spelling error ("chat spell") items, as they look much better spelled out when written as a poem. Example:
"u cant hear your voice neither can u see.." should be
"you can't hear your voice neither can you see.."
And
"i smile through the tears&enjoy the fall..
coz what life it is to never have loved at all!!!" should be
"I smile through the tears and enjoy the fall..
'cause what life it is to never have loved at all!!! and so on.
Beautiful poem. Well expressed.
David E. Young
www.davideyoung.com
thanq ..i ll do that..
thanq ..i ll do that..