Find Me

As I wander through the wilderness
Without any hope of gain
My fingers fill with freezing ness as my stomach starts to pain.
Why can’t you find me? Do you realize Im gone?
I sit here waiting and doubting you till it nearly reaches dawn.
I dare not close my eyes as I fear I’ll never wake
Im longing for you through my cries, but it’s my life that’s at stake.
I shiver from my head right down to my feet
Im wishes and im hoping that for one last time we'll meet.
My inside is ice cold my breaths become intense,
Im famished nearly half to death and my pain is quite immense

I look up high and see a light and realize im dying
My head gets light with anxiety as I suddenly start flying
Im floating through the trees but the pain hasn’t gone away
Oh won’t you find me please, today might be my day.

My dearest darling child, my sweet heart where are you?
Im searching for you everywhere where have you disappeared to?
Don’t fret my little desperate child, don’t worry, you'll be found,
I run up to that lonely tree and find you on the ground
I flash my strong bright torch and your eyes seem new to light
I carry you off through the trees and you seem oblivious to my help
Don’t worry my dear child I’ll not again let you out of my sight
My love and care for you right now is the best I’ve ever felt

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This is a great poem you should be proud of.... io love every bit of your poetry because of how much meaning and effort you put into it, i know i'm only 14 but i can recognize talent when i see it and man do you have talent..... keep writting

thanx

thnx 4 ur comment verry appreciated and im only 15 myself so i too can recognise talent and youve got some TERRIFIC pieces KAMS i mean it. i love your work
thnx agen xx

kams right

you certainly have talent,you should definately keep writing...I find it easy to read your poems cause I feel your style is so much like mines,at least I think so...anyway great write,thanks for sharing...Ricklovin

wow..

wow, im flattered, thnx rick you made my day..agen lol
i wish my poems were as good as yours i cant stop reading yours, theyre addictive ;-)
thnx
snuggly bug ;-)

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