IM AFTER YOU!!!!
I look over here and I look over there,
I try my damn hardest not to just stare
You sit there so merrily smiling away
Do you not know that today is your day?
Im waiting for you to show me some sign
That tells me for certain that now is your time
And then as I figure that you are the one
I start at my work, ensuring your life is done.
You start with a cough from the pit of your gut
You stand up from discomfort and paralyze your foot.
Don’t tell me its fine I know you’re in pain
I thrive off your screams when I pick at your brain
Your veins, their the best, I can twist them like string
I can rip them apart as I depressingly sing
You yell for help as your blood starts to clot
Your skin start to boil as you get agonizingly hot
I’ll spare you more pain, im too tired today
I’d usually be crushing your bones to powder
But hear this, my weakling; there'll be a high price to pay
If any other soul can scream any louder
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very good indeed...
This is a very cleverly written piece of work,death is always lurking in the shadows,it all depends if its your time or not.....and that is the one thing we'll never know for certain even with all the tech in the world.we dont decide and when death comes knocking our souls have no choice....nice write! :)
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I had no idea someone could write like that, i definatly look up to you.....
BTW- thanks for the earlier comments- they where great...
KAMS
thanx
thanx a lot 4 your comment->well appreciated-> its nice to hear that other people know what im talking about lol
its wierd the way i find it easier writing about strange things like death(not that im a psycho or anything tho) hehe:-) i just find it more interesting :-)
twisted
I love this one,right up my alley lol...twist them like string,as I depressingly sing,awesome.....excellent write snuggly bug.....Ricklovin
THNK YOU
thnx soo much Rick, that has deffo given me a confidence boost =D -> you rock !!!
;-)