LITTLE DYING SOUL
I remember the day when we had to say good bye
I remember your helpless face when in agony you’d cry
I remember how mum would sit at night in pain
Your dying at that crucial time was too much for her to contain
The tears we shed and our hearts which bled when seeing you suffering on your death bed.
Dad, in despair would sit in the waiting room chair crying so hard, it was too much to bear.
We kept telling ourselves that things would be fine
But inside we all knew you were at the end of your line
You thought we were happy, but we were all in such shock
Your death at the time we were all trying to block
Your attitude and strength we could only admire. Your smile filled our hearts with a longing desire as it ripped through our pain like a burning hot fire.
You went in such peace; you just closed your eyes
Straight after we all had just said our good byes
When death does eventually knock at my door,
I’ll hug you and kiss you like never before
Rest in peace my dear little brother we shall meet again and hold one another.
When the time comes I’ll embrace death with pride
As I know now for certain you’ll be waiting on the other side.
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This piece brought me to tears......very well written. Touching
thnxx =D
thnx a lot for your comment-> my brothers death was exactly how i described it feels wierd but nice to allow others to read it-> thnx agen ;-)
snuggly bug xx
SNUGGLYBUG...
THIS....is a wonderful poem. You have me crying now...this must have been so sad for you all when your brother passed away. im so sorry.
Sweet,... when you get to heaven that you will hug and kiss...so sweet. beautifully written from YOUR heart!!!
You, snuggly are a fine writer yourself!
Linda
it means a lot to me ...
it means a lot to me that you can tell its from my heart as it definately was.
thnx for your lovely comment linda-> well appreciated ;-)
ill never be as fine a writer as you but i enjoy it sooo much
thnx agen =D
snuggly bug .x.x.
You....
You already are a great writer, snuggly bug! you really are!
keep up the good work.
i find all the "good stuff" is just sitting right there in my heart waiting to come out..its so nice when it happens.
Linda
thnx
thats soo sweet and you must have a really big heart for soo much good stuff to come pouring out as it does. thnx for your support linda, im delighted that you think im a good writer and am now inspired to keep trying
thank you so much xx
snuggly bug .x.x.