Love and Roses
She bloomed as his sun
drew closer to her love
so he called her rose
Her plush earth entranced him
so she fed him from her bed
and when buds appeared to her liking
she invited him to rest
within the folds
of her fragrant pink petals
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This was very short and
This was very short and simple. I enjoyed it very much.
~Anon
simply amazing...
... how you have put those short words and simple lines altogether but drove to that erotic point... swaaaash!
-Marjo Josue
Sultry
Very beautiful poem and very powerful, my favourite piece was the final few lines
'She invited him to rest
within the folds
of her fragrant pink petals'
JJ