confessions of a paradoxical maniac

with you
hours pass like minutes
and days as long as years

with you
outbursts of devotion
fuel the fires of my fears

with you
at times, a stark enigma
perspicuously clear

with you
the distant red horizon
looms comfortably near

with you
a luminescent smile
fades beneath an icy tear

with you
it's simple and straightforward
yet not as it appears

There once was a girl...

...who made me feel EXACTLY like that. I'm jealous. I wish I had written this.

gracias, mi amigo =]

Thanks very much :D
This poem was based off of personal experience as well, so i share your frustrations :P Why can't people just be straightforward and not such a puzzle?

is he the eternal mystery, or what?

guess you've got to get to know this guy, how long has he been around? he, he! great imagery. I enjoyed this a lot!

joyce

oh, you have nooo idea :P

Yes, 'the eternal mystery' is quite an appropriate title to give him.
Thanks very much =]

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