First love

This is to kiss her lips:
a snapshot photo at the arc
of a swing when we were laughing
and hanging back on the ropes
caught at the zenith before
the downward plunge, before
the forward throw of your body
and giddy backward rush and rise.

The spinning out of this universe
turns to quiet collapse and no one
knows but me. Somewhere

in the mantle of the hawthorne
a raindrop drips and slides
along a leaf into the small of its back.
The well of it globes until it’s too heavy
and runs to the lobed lip to gather
again and again to drop from leaf to leaf.

Here I wait to meet you.

Here I wait, not knowing
how many years it takes.

Very cool...

Loved your poem. The idea of waiting for love rings true for me! Enjoyed the lines:

The spinning out of this universe
turns to quiet collapse and no one
knows but me.

And "Here I wait, not knowing how many years it takes." is just like an epitaph of hope at the end. Splendid.

Hey, Ulysses...

I’ve just caught up with your comments and see I’m late to thank you, sorry for that! First Loves, eh, they never leave you.

Steph

hunh

Is this you? I like this--nice build up though I'd lose the last lines. Like globes as a verb and all.

Best, Annie

Hello Annie, how do you do?

Leaping Lizards... is that little Annie with the orange curly hair?

Those last lines...

I... must... re... sist... them... Oh bugger it, why not?

Yeah, you’re right, Ms Smarty Pants.

Steph

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