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Posted September 19th, 2007 by Strobelight

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Hallo

On September 20th, 2007 Aleksandr says:

While I can't say I am a fan of the entire poem(I almost stopped reading after "my lips to his nips"), I can honestly say "He loves to touch every part of me to every part of him like every way is a way to get in." is one of the best lines I've ever read on this site. I find it hard to dismiss the entire poem just because of that line. Good luck on the next draft.
Aleksandr

I agree. That was a great

On September 23rd, 2007 Mr. Moribund says:

I agree. That was a great line.

Some few in that, but Numbers err in this,
Ten Censure wrong for one who Writes amiss;
A Fool might once himself alone expose,
Now One in Verse makes many more in Prose.
-- Alexander Pope

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On October 10th, 2007 Strobelight says:

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