Hey - I almost wept when I read this! This is sooo beautiful and sooo sad! I read all your poems after this one, but still, this is the one that will stick in my mind...

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I like this one. Actually I liked it the first time I read it but never got around to commenting. Lots of concrete details here that make it work. Broken relationships leave all this weird... clutter. Nice job.

Some few in that, but Numbers err in this,
Ten Censure wrong for one who Writes amiss;
A Fool might once himself alone expose,
Now One in Verse makes many more in Prose.
-- Alexander Pope