good-bye

God took you away.
It doesn't seem fair,
but in the back of my mind,
you will always be there.

You weren't a close friend,
but our paths did cross,
and your absence in this world,
is to me a great loss.

You were too young to die, and
too innocent to feel that pain.
Only heaven benefits,
because you it has now gained.

I may think of you a little less
with each passing day,
but your strength is something I won't forget,
you have changed me in a way.

I wish for you eternal peace;
that's what you deserve my friend.
I hope I lead my life well enough
to meet up with you in the end.

so much

i read most all of your writes, and you have suffered so much pain, loss, depression.
stay strong. it will all work out for the best.

Thank you

Thank you for taking the time to read them nd i hope that you enjoyed them, nd i will stay strong im not gunna giv up yet lol xoxoxoxoxox

wow. the second to last

wow. the second to last verse almost had me in tears. beauty. utter beauty.

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Thank you very much

I did`nt actually think about wat i was writing it just spilled out nd i thought it was crap, so you`r comment has really made me happy thank you =)
xoxoxoxox

Oh you're very welcome. If

Oh you're very welcome. If you ever need a review, let me know, I'm happy to read anything. And if you feel like giving me some feedback, I would really appreciate that too. :)

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I will

I will letyou know thanx nd im guna read your`s now k xoxoxox

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