My mad rant

I went on an angry rant and decided to write and these are little things i came up with.

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Another love gone wrong
Another heart to shatter
Welcome to reality where
Feelings dont matter.

Call and say sweet things to me.
Build me up then tear me down,
you like me best on the ground!

The girl who seemed unbreakable - Broke
The girl who seemed so strong - Crumbled
The girl who always laughed it off - Cryed
And the girl who would never stop trying - Finally gave up!

A broken mirror a bleeding fist,
A silver blade against a wrist.
Tears falling down to lips unkissed,
I`m not the kind you`ll come to miss!

Girl meets boy.
Girl falls hard.
Boy doesn`t even stumble!

then who is king?

Loved it loved it loved it. most great thoughts are those that are angry pissed off and down right fucking crazzy and all of which are even greater in lyrical cries. though the ending is... Eden ish... anyway.. not always the case. I ask, how well did I play off my stumble? loved it none-the-less

Thanks

I`m glad you liked it lol
You played it off very well lol
Thank you for reading =)
xoxox

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