Blindsided
**inspired by a no-good, bad idea, past relationship lol**
How did you do it?
You seduced me, enticed me to your side
Logic was irrelevant
From you I could not hide
From the start you had me charmed
And from the start you caused me pain
You held my hand, I sweetly smiled
Yet weakened from your disdain
You did not care, and yet you did
O was it a clever trick
As love grew inside of me
You bruised it, beat it just as quick
I could not refuse, I was drawn to you
To your inviting, tender embrace
But I was betrayed by your indifference
A burning slap to my face
What a pity we but comply
To the ones whom our nature is lured
And though we bask in their affection
Their scathing truth is soon endured
So how did you do it?
Your thoughtless actions make no sense
My emotions suffer from my haste
Therefore receive no recompense
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Blindsided
Great piece, flows well and reads easy. I like it. Great title as well, really suits this poem.
Dave
thank you
after i wrote it, i kinda felt like the title should be called "what the f@*#&?" lol but somehow, it seemed inappropriate lol. thanks for the comment, i appriciate it ;o)
Kim
Ha ha
"What the Fuck?" sounds like a title I could use!!! I think your title is far more impressive! Enjoying your pieces, so keep them coming, off to do some writing now.............hmmm..... what rhymes with fuck??!! Ha ha
Dave