From Your Secret Admirer
**i found this while i was cleaning my room just now...::sigh:: my room is such a mess lol**
From your secret admirer
To you, this I write
My love for you grows,
But grows out of sight.
No hint of a clue
To you will I send
Sweet words written in secret,
So please comprehend.
Each day we cross paths
and I see you walk by.
My courage escapes me.
I guess I’m too shy.
Dear One, what I’d say
If I could get near…
Soft things I would whisper
In your little ear.
I’d tell you about all
These feelings inside.
How tender I feel
When I look in your eyes.
That I long for your kiss
To touch my shy lips,
The weight of your hands
To rest on my hips,
Your warm firm embrace
To hold me so close.
But your hand in my hand
I desire the most.
But for now, here I wait
And you’ll never know…
How much I adore you,
How I love you so.
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Wow
I love this. It touches my heart and brings me memories of my secret admirations as a child, and makes me wistful of such a love for myself someday. Well done.
David E. Young
www.davideyoung.com
Beautiful!
This is a lovely piece! Captures everything about being crazy for somebody and not being able to tell them. Reads easy and delivered well, my only suggestion would be to clean your room again, so you could maybe find more of the same!! Ha ha,
Lovely work!
Dave
you know....
while i was cleaning my room, i was kind of hoping to find this one poem i wrote a while ago ::sigh:: it's called Pirate Hooker...i can't find it anywhere.....so sad i haven't come across it yet lol as soon as i do, IT'S GOIN' UP!!!! lol wish me luck ;o)
Kim
brilliant poem superflysquirrel
Loved this one would make beautiful words for a Valentine card.well written a great love poem of love what a good find well done from Willow
So wonderful
I love this! It so well captures the longing of desiring someone but being too shy to let the feelings out... Wonderful!
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Write, write and write some more til the letters come off your keyboard!
- Charlie "Chuck Rickman" Jackson
Superflysquirrel.... awesome!
great writing on this one. this reads like a pretty song!
I have to say, im dying to read "pirate hooker"...LOL!
keep cleaning and look under the bed...
Linda
hmmm
Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com
Kim,
Seems you have many secret admirer's reading your poem, anyone else under your bed :)