Can't say
Did you find what you were looking for?
Or did you find what you wish to ignore..
The slippery slope he slides each day
It doesn't take the pain away
He hides in the shadows of what he cannot say
Waiting for my opinion to make his thoughts ok
But alas he is lost
all his strength has gone away
But I can't carry the burden
of all he cannot say
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Can't Say
This comes across to me as desperatley sad, a lost soul with no idea which way to turn. Perhaps a place many of us have been, at one time or another. I know I have, maybe thats why it struck such a chord with me. A truly brilliant write!!
Dave
Thank you Dave
It's good to know what I write carries some meaning, I appreciate your feedback and look forward to more writing from you as well. Amy