A day in a life

Forceps of rigor
never to be explained

The tightening of grips
something will be regained

Slip and fall down
then do it again

Dust yourself off,
yet the sordidness remains.

Cling to the seedlings
the offering of life

Push it all away....
This time, fall with strife

Cast away the vanity
Hold it in it's place

Fall down gently now
secure in it's embrace.

A Day In A Life

Fantastic!! Works really well, a pleasure to read
Dave

Thank You

I was almost so critical of it that I wasn't going to post it. Thanks for the compliment, I guess I did convey my intent. :)

Well done..

I want more! keep writing.

Thanks..

I'll try...

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