Just, the latest thing...

As my best friend
I trusted you,
I loved you,
I stood by you,
When your girlfriend treated you wrong
I was there, for you to complain to

Yeah, I know... Love poem, AGAIN, but If I didn't write it, I fear I might have gone crazy. So here it is, tell me what you think! Please, and Thank you!

Do I give it up?
Or Wait it out?

We’ve been through this time and again
It always turns out the same
One will be ticked, the other apologetic
You’ll say “I’m sorry, won’t you…
Forgive me?”

Writing a Poem
That seems difficult
Something for which you need emotion
But what type
Is it love, happiness, or depression?
Or… something else?
Or simply the need to write?

Eyes swollen from tears
No where to turn
I hide from the world
In my bath room
Locking the door,
Shutting you out
I sit and weep
I shudder in fear
I climb into the tub
Aching for security

Personally I find my own poem rather repulsing, but I'll post it anyway, any comments are greatly appreiciated, in fact I'd really like to make it better, so PLEASE comment away.

Here it goes...

Whisper
Whisper is the sound I hear,
Is it in my head, of really here?
I walk alone through the halls,
One of many who break the rules
I do it though, not for attention,

Haunting my soul, are the sweet ambitions of the future.
Creeping across my mind, are thoughts of you.
Clawing at my heart is my love for you.

These hands ache to feel that touch,

I’ll wait for you,
As long as it takes
I’ll be here my love.

We’ve talked of that day,
When we’ll finally meet

I’ll see your face,
You’ll hear my laugh.

Sometimes I wonder.

What would it be like if there were nothing to worry about?
Would we wander in life with out a doubt?

Would there still be emotion?

If I dropped off the face of the planet,
Would you care?

I can name a few who might
But I won’t, I don’t care

Parents screaming
Yelling
They say they care,
But they don’t