The Tree

I used to sit outside my world
And gaze up at a tree
There was a time it was my only friend
But know it barley recognizes me
I stand alone at my window
And take in the sight of the tree, empty limbed and scarred
It used to bloom with glorious pinks
In the fresh spring sun
But now it is harsh and hard
As soon as I stopped wanting to play
The trees beauty went away
I cry for the memories lost
And for the price that growing up cost
If only I could climb back on
To its comforting limb
And once again spend the day with imaginary playmates
To one more time live whim to whim
I used to gaze up at a tree
It was my only friend
Then the world made me grow up
And our friendship came to an end.

your tree

nice one, taylor - but let me tell you, the tree remembers you -
so you are not so alone
I have a tree remembers all kinds of things - a kind of memory tree I guess - lets me in on things I never saw, like my mum riding a horse aged about 16 or so
anyways, cheers and keep it coming

don't let it come to an end,

don't let it come to an end, Taylor
cheers mm

you portray

the tree with spirit, friendship, companionship, an appreciation and a longing for that lost companionship. Nice. raskin

Thanks

Thanks so much for the comments and feedback...they are always appreciated
~*Taylor M.E Leeder*~

the giving tree

it reminds me of the children's book the giving tree. it's still one of my favorite books

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