Love Is Undefined

The room is filled with darkness and pain;
On the wall I see your name.
I have no self esteem;
And don't know what you mean;

When you say ' I love you'.

Where a dream goes and dies;
A simple look in your eyes.
My tears are of anguish and hurt;
You walk all over me- I am dirt;

When you say ' I love you'.

Love is not defined, though I wish it was;
I cry and I cry simply because;
Websters can not help our emotions.
Our ideas on 'love' are two different notions;

When you say ' I love you'.

Is it a misunderstanding or an elaborate lie;
When I walk past you, I simply sigh.
I put my head down and walk to the south;
While you go north, the words still fresh on your mouth;

When you say ' I love you'.

An undefined 'love' that may or may not exist, makes my suffering eternal and forever without any chance of escaping this wretched fate of dark, damp sorrow...

that is good

I love the line breaks. Nice of you to go for the less obvious title, than sticking with When You Say I Love You. The rhyme scheme really made the poem. Love is undefined, and it may be frustrating to hear someone say it and you do not understand why or if you should say it back, but it is nice to hear. And it is easy to get lost in. Great writing.

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