Tears

Tears flow,
Because I
Don't know
When I'll see
You again.

I'm sending
My love
To you.

You
are truely
My
Best friend.

And
I'm
Here for
You.

From beginning
To end.

nice one tj

nice little poem tj short but says it all thanks for the read from Willow

Your quite welcome

Thank you.

nice

i really like this poem. it kind of reminds me of a situation i am in. my friends and i have grown distant and have drifted apart. its hard because i want to spend time with them but i have swim and they have softball so we have completely different schedules. but this poem really made me think about that situation. thank you
can you criticize mine?
lynz

I would be delighted to.

Thank you for asking.

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