Pure Lovemaking

Pure Lovemaking!

just the moans of our thoughts riding gently on winds
from the pleasure we give, from so deep within
our skin tingles as, the cool sea air still blows
feeding our fire, that keeps us aglow
when the feeling begins, our souls both release
so somewhere in space, our bodies can meet
not the physical sense, this lovemaking we share
but our minds and our hearts transport us both there
and like mountains we climb, towards the heavens so high
the clouds, like our breath, when on cold days you sigh
the sounds are now deep, like the thunder so loud
as the boom shakes the earth...and the growing crowd
they gathered to see, what true love has now made
as the sounds and the sights, they now cannot fade
though they hear and they see, what a joy we can make
they can't see us, but somehow, it was what we create
from a heartbeat, a laugh, a stare and a smile
will keep going and growing, like endless long miles
how they wish they could be, like the love that they feel
but it's ours to bring forth, with a kiss it was sealed.

Wow!

Really, really nice!
deep, within your souls!
great write, tortured soul
Linda

Thank you

Thank you Linda for the comment. I know this will sound corny but I'm a hopeless romantic and true love is such a beautiful thing to experience....
Stay well, One love and God bless!

Thats good!

it doesnt sound corny at all TS...and youre right, true love is such a beautiful thing. your words described it perfectly. i have never read anything so beautiful.
keep up the good work.
someone is lucky to have you
Linda

Blush

You honor me with your words and I thank you again. I thought she wanted me...lol...ah well, so goes life. I'm still hungry too btw...that poem of yours was great!
Stay well, One love and God bless!

Pure Heart

Very nice writing TS... You reached deep into your tortured soul to express your love so deeply and vividly… Welcome to the Poet's Hearts Club ... I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems... So much to read… so little time ... I will get to them eventually!

Keep up the great work!

Ray AKA yobarney
By Raymond F. Baldorossi Jr.

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