My life has become broken
My life has become broken, smashed and shattered.
How have you forgotten the love?
I asked you to come to me so that you can explain.
How could you cause conflict in this relation?
This is my last chance with you.
If I lost you again,hope is no more!
When I knew you were angry, I came quickly.
I could not forget you as from you I've learned passion.
I called you my soul when I was in torture,then you'd forget me.
When all were angry with me,you never showed that emotion for a second.
But I can still dream and count the stars at night,
For in my life now my night is my mirror
And my days were not good when I knew you had forgotten me.
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* This poem is for my best teacher poems.
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You should be so proud Ubuntu....
Really nice heart felt passionate poem that alot of people can relate to.....you have hidden talents after all......keep up the great work :)
Thanks repenter86
Your kind words are appreciated.
I am still believe that; I can not write poems. However, I can learn from you.
God bless you,
your wecome but...
dont learn from me...learn from your heart and your own experiences in life,im sure you have many wonderful and sad things to share with us all......like every other poet ,keep it up and boost that confidence level ubuntu,your poem is great! ;)