Tell her that

My poem please let her know and tell her that;

Tell her that I hate her
Tell her that I love someone new
Tell her that I don't need her any more
Tell her that she is nothing for me
But please....
Don't tell her that I cried when I wrote all that.

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good write

sometimes we all need to let it out and our emotions become so frustrating that we often say things we dont mean.,nevertheless it was good and keep it up.

thanks

your kind words are appreciated and it is true feeling.
When you give some one your soul and she/he hurts you .. I think this will be the right poem to let her/him know.

Pride..

I felt that this piece was about pride and self respect. Not wanting to expose our weaknesses in front of others.

I think that this has been expressed very well.

Debs

you are right

thank for your comments
I think you are right, absolutely right about (Not wanting to expose our weaknesses in front of others. )

Is it Hunanity or Friendly spirit?

What can I say?
If a "picture is worth a thousand words"
then how many words does a feeling cost?
and this was more than I can count
for although It took everything I had to watch her walk away
it took even mor to tell her I hated her for what she put me through
and the tears....
well....
they never seem to end....

you wrote what everyone is feeling. Thank you.
For all it's worth...

I am glad you enjoyed

your kind comments are appreciated,I enjoy your work also! thnx 4 reading

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