Broken and Healed
First panic
Then realization
And sinking
Then anguish
And bawling
Then sorting
And thinking
Then fears
And dealing
Then feeling
And crying
Then disgust
And figuring
Then babble
And exhaustion
Then tears
And indulgence
Then craziness
And monologue
Then lying
And accepting
Then truthful
And peace
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what a fantastic poem!
this is a wonderful poem - i especially love the short lines. it has an energy of its own - building up and up and then resolving itself at the end - this is fantastic!!!
Broken and Healed
Good sense of urgency. Well done
Mike
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woah! so cool! okay this got my adrenaline going, i love things like that. great-eat job baby! man, i'm having trouble deciding whether i've found a new fave poem. okay, peaceful joy of "True Happiness" or rush of adrenaline from this...? ah! i can't decide! they're both fantastic!
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