Planets Collide

Steadily we exist,
In a state of constant transition.
Moving orbit to orbit,
As the sun reveals our position.
I remove the shield,
So as i may bask in the twilight.
Your celestial aura,
Warming the night.
After, i now know you,
Our paths now intertwined.
The nature of space,
To separate and unwind.
We pause,
Then i think i just might,
Let the cabin decompress,
Risking,
The potential for emptiness,
In the hope of someday finding you again.
Slowly the air vacates me,
My lungs now empty,
Attracted to your expanse.
I see the particles and vapour,
as they disperse to infinity.
They now begin their journey,
As this space is killing me.

this is

really interesting to read more than it seems I like the ending. raskin

Thanks

Cheers for the comments,
Was just a spur of the moment type thing. Was having some trouble with a lady, it's just about that really.

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