Fire
Fire
That fire in your eyes
Used to inspire me,
Motivate me,
To do well--
As well as you.
Now
All it does to me now
Is frighten me,
Intimidate me,
And I'm scared--
Scared of what you've become.
Fire
Consumed by the fire
That controls you,
Becomes you,
So that you're gone--
Not the same as before.
I just want you back.
But you're lost to the
Fire.
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My Lady!
WinTer rOsE, very well done!
Please forgive me, my Lady, but I must ask - who are you speaking of in this poem? A lover, a friend, or some other? Who was it you looked up to so highly? And who changed so dramatically.
I know I'm being nosey. Please forgive me for asking, but such a wonderful poem leaves me wondering. I can certainly understand if it's too personal to share.
Confession...
I have a confession to make, tj...I didn't write this poem from experience. I actually just started playing around with words, and put myself in this situation that I have never experienced. I am an actress, so I am somewhat skilled at becoming someone else and seeing things from their perspective. I tried to write this as though a lover had suddenly changed, and now the narrator no longer knows who that person really is. I thought it turned out well for having never lived it. As I wrote it, I could feel the emotions brewing inside me: the anger, mistrust, bewilderment, and betrayal the person I portrayed would feel. I apologize if this disappoints you in any way...I was experiementing with scenarios and different writing scenes, and this was the outcome. It was more of a story than an outpour of emotion. I am also a writer, so this was sort of like a poetic short story. I hope you don't mind.
wInTeR rOsE
Thanks for replying
To my question. Sorry, I was being nosey.
Don't!
Don't even worry about it! You were not nosey in the least!!! It is a reasonable question, and if I read a poem with such strong emotion as I tried to make this particular poem of mine, I would have wondered, too. You had every right to ask and I am not affended in the least. I promise =]. I apologize if I gave you that impression. I did not mean to. I value your curiosity and interest in my writing, because this means that my poetry invoked thoughts wen you read it. Thank you very much for everything you do and say, it is appreciated greatly. And thank you also for your concern =].
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