Run
Run,
Run to him,
Before the sun rests its golden head
And the moon takes its guard of the earth.
Faster,
Until you reach him,
Before your legs surrender to the exhaustion
And the ground takes revenge on your knees for pounding upon it.
Hurry,
Go to him,
Before the sky hides all light out of your grasp
And the moon turns a side-face to your challenges.
Reach,
Until you find him,
Before the ground grows soft with shared tears from the sky
And the earth seeks to consume you.
Believe,
Believe in him,
Before the fates test their hands in your life and his
And change the course of a lifetime with a sudden bout of mist.
Love,
Until time ends,
Before the clock stops its ticking in spite
And he is lost forever.
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Beautiful,so much grace and
Beautiful,so much grace and harmony seen in those lines,wonderfully written {all the magic of this world,
dwells within you,
an eternity of years,
and its all you ever needed to know.}
great poem
Great poem. it flows nicely.
Run
I like the format of this poem, and what it says to the reader. Thankyou for sharing.
Deborah
Beautiful content
Beautiful truthful flow.
Inspiration plus, "Run"...
oldaspirationsneverdie...7
Yes with all the glory do run
Your touch full of the summer's sun
Oh! Now don't wait too long
'Fore the end of this song
For an end do cometh
By all means Runeth
Believe...
Just an ad lib on your beautiful poem, its warning pleas and its
remarkable imagery make for a very interesting read...
Hear the old pleas so run
'Fore the end of the sun...
Let not the black out come
Before you learn to so run...
~Believe in Him~
~As the clock ticks
~And as the clock tocks
By all means run...
WOW, an excellent poet we
WOW, an excellent poet we have here. I love your style, your words so meaningful throughout. Well Done. Angel
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Thanks, Angel!
Aw, gee thanks! I'm glad you find this poem well done. I worked hard to make it pleasurable.
wInTeR rOsE
Oh, so kind oldaspirationsneverdie...7
Wow, your wording in that re-make of Run was amazing. I loved it! I am honored that you would find my poem good enough to re-do it. That was very cool to see it written in a different way--it was so similar, yet different. Very artful.
wInTeR rOsE
My apologies
I give my apologies, for I don't believe I have ever thanked the other reviewers. So thank you to all who have reviewed: adialstarwatcher, ArtFromTheHeart, Scareysquirel, and supergal2@go.com. I'm sorry I did not tell you sooner that I am eternally grateful for your excellent feedback.
Sincerety is found in the depth of words.
wInTeR rOsE