Writers with a Purpose

Words are the paint of literature,
Pens and fingers the brushes,
To create a connection from the world to the mind,
Or the mind to the world,
And build the bridges people need to cross to see inside themselves,
To truely come to know who they are,
Because without these words
We would never know,
And that which makes life so meaningful would be lost forever
Is the sea of nothingness.

Poets are writers with a purpose;
We will change the world by untangling the mass tangle of thoughts
That tend to clump inside our minds,
Or by relieving the emotions in our hearts
By dissipating them in the air for all to relate.

Well said

very nice work! i applaud it

Thanks, random!

Why, thank you, random writer =]
wInTeR rOsE

....

you forgot to capitalize pens...
[your words will always remain]

Thanks

Good catch, Beaches, I never would have seen that on my own =]. I'd love to hear more feedback from you.

{Words that remain clump inside the brain}
wInTeR rOsE

the words that remain

don't let the words clump too much... they could cause a stroke...
[your words will always remain]

Funny

I hope that was supposed to be funny, because I can't stop laughing! Alright, I'll sober up now.

The stroke of a writer cause by too many words is but a writer's epiphany.
wInTeR rOsE

funny

ha it was supposed to be funny... lots of things are... i'll tell you about some when we see each other again... well maybe i will
[your words will always remain]

WANTING TO THANK YOU AGAIN

I like your work and waned to thank you so very much on your feed back
I stink at spelling even at my old age, I went to the school of hard knocks
AND YOU LINE: Words are the paint of literature,, True That love it
God Bless You
Susan Jean

I'm glad

drmvalley, you are so too nice =]. I'm here to help, and you have no need to thank me for it. I'm glad you like that line of the poem "words are the paint of literature," I did indeed find it to be true, and thought I needed to tell the everypoet community =].

A reflection may show you yourself, but you do not need to be seen to know yourself.
wInTeR rOsE

100

It hit 100 reads!!!
congrats
Dreams of Beaches

WOW

WOO WHOO 104 YOU GO GIRL

God Bless You
Susan Jean

Ha ha, thanks =]

Thank you for the congratulating words, beaches and drmvalley! You are so nice to me. I am very pleased, too, to know that I have had over 100 reads =]. I just wish I had more comments! I mean, 100 reads and only this many comments?? I am still very grateful. Thank you for those of you who do comment! You rock my world.

wInTeR rOsE

hey

I know the feeling my friend about the comments
not sure why and your not sure if you work is any good or not
but you are good my friend
God Bless You
Susan Jean

Oh, drmvalley =]

You say such nice things to me. Thank you. I am glad you understand what I feel. Otherwise, I'd be along on a little raft on a sea of confusing and unknowingness =]. You are a fantastic writer as well.

wInTeR rOsE

No Honey

I'm on that little raft with you LOL
God Bless You
Susan Jean

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