Turning Leaves

Burning deep inside,
so much harder to hide,
this train wreck of a ride,
leaves him wanting

Feelings oh so true,
he knows not what to do,
the flames burn hot with blue,
leaves him turning

Desire, soft to steel,
imaginary feel,
this idea all too real,
leaves him breathless

well done

Nice imagery. I enjoyed reading this!

joyce

Thank you for the kind words

Thank you for the kind words Joyce.

Nice Write

I like how you have choosen to end every stanza with leaves him...'
I think this really adds weight to the piece, and it was a pleasure to read.

Thank you for kinds words

Thank you for kinds words Scarey. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.

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